Short film I made "the paper round"

[blackoutfilms]

i know this is my first post but we have made a film aimed at this age range (well between 15-25 years old) and would like feedback so check it out

http://youtube.com/watch?v=drjGpbp9KUY
cheers!

[Gemski]

Wow.
That was so good.
I really loved the way it all linked in too!!
Oh god.. haha, Was well good, :D!!

[blackoutfilms]

thanks we find (we are all uni students) it so hard to gaqin feedback from our target audience (its marked by people about 40 years older than whom we want it to be marked by) so i appreciate your feedback as will all the group members

thanks again

blackout

[Gemski]

No probs heh. I actually felt like crying with the old woman! that was really sad.
and I felt bad for the boy when they took his bike
I was like, "Oh you idiot, he's not gonna get your bike back for you, silly!" lol.

[Kerry]

Wow.
That was so good.
I really loved the way it all linked in too!!
Oh god.. haha, Was well good, :D!!
I agree, it was great!
Well done :D

[Bob!]

Rofl lookin at page three in the lift. :D

And quite good actually, long as its a lil side project and not for money and so on as it looks then ya have permission to post any more of em ya make in this topic if ya want them ratin. I'll merge em into ya first post if ya do so theyre all in one place. :)

We'd like some background information though, is it for your uni work and so on? And I see it follows different stories and so on but are they all meant to carry on mergin together in the end or stay seperate?

[blackoutfilms]

Yea this was a university 3rd year project which we want people of out target demographic to view so we can get feedback, which in turn, will help us with future products - we just want exposure no money.
we left it open with the merging, for example when gavins phone rings and hes like "my nan?" it could link that his nan is beryl
just somr trivia for you - the actor who played jason was also in sahara, batman, bourne supremecy, charlie and cho factory and i cant remember the rest
the paper shop owner was also in peak pratice

[Bob!]

Ahhh, cheers for the info.

And aye feel free to post any of the next parts and we'll help out by giving ya some views, tis nice to have some new stuff like this on the forums now and then, spesh if it helps out with yer project. :)

And leaving it open is a very good idea to give ya more flexibility with the story.

[Gemski]

Looovoe it