living a lie

[jman61]

here is something i wrote to express how i feel

feel free to comment and let me know what you think =]

I wish I was more than I am
Its hard to be who you are because the world doesn’t give a damn
Once you built up the wall you hide behind
Covering up the real you is something you no longer mind
Hiding behind fake emotions and unreal smiles
Is where the real you lies
Something tells you that what everyone thinks is real
Asking yourself when will my scarring heart heal
When can I be who I really want to be
When can I let it go and be free
Living a life of someone who you do not know
Is too painful and its killing you slow
All that you want is to break free and fly
But how? When you are living a lie

[GemmaJamPot]

Wow :) I think ur good!
It kinda sounds like lyrics... in a good way. :) Lol.

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[jman61]

Wow :) I think ur good!
It kinda sounds like lyrics... in a good way. :) Lol.

X

Thanks you =]

[GemmaJamPot]

Anytime.. you write how all good poets should, from whats inside you, and from life experiences. Its mature writing, and impressive. :)

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[Glamour_Love]

I really like it :)

[KatieMay-]

That's amazing :)

Says exactly what I feel inisde right now
as i read i was nodding, agreeing with everything you say.

well done. hope you feel better soon

[TinksX]

yeah, well done that is really good!! Sums up a lot of things for me aswell.

You are a powerful write keep it up.

+ hope things get better for you

soph xxx

[jman61]

thank you all for the amazing input

[lipgloss]

That was wickedly good! It's so true too! I like your poetry cuz it has real emotion.