Writer4Lifer
January 16th '10, 08:22 PM
The dunes shone with an ethereal glow as the sun crept over the lip of the horizon, and as the geese made their routine hawking cries which most long-time occupants of this remote country would now find distracting...she found it quite enthralling.
This incredibly beautiful night confirmed that the move to a completely new country when all her friends and family still resided in sunny old England was most certainly worth it. To her, sitting on the roof of her newly acquired egyptian home, surrounded by blossoming acacia trees, watching the sunset and knowing a loving husband waited for her downstairs was the very meaning of the term "perfect".
It was in fact he who had made the suggestion of living here, telling her stories of beautiful lands, friendly people and much more, none of which was untruthful. Although David was probably now widely hated between everyone she was close to for, "stealing her", she had become extremely fond of him ever since she first laid eyes on him.
What I am really looking for is for some ideas for the remainder of the story. this is going to be part of my coursework and hopefully published :D. I am 14 years old.
This incredibly beautiful night confirmed that the move to a completely new country when all her friends and family still resided in sunny old England was most certainly worth it. To her, sitting on the roof of her newly acquired egyptian home, surrounded by blossoming acacia trees, watching the sunset and knowing a loving husband waited for her downstairs was the very meaning of the term "perfect".
It was in fact he who had made the suggestion of living here, telling her stories of beautiful lands, friendly people and much more, none of which was untruthful. Although David was probably now widely hated between everyone she was close to for, "stealing her", she had become extremely fond of him ever since she first laid eyes on him.
What I am really looking for is for some ideas for the remainder of the story. this is going to be part of my coursework and hopefully published :D. I am 14 years old.