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    For a Raincoat company.
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    Looking good Shane.
    I think it needs a bit of positive kerning on the type, the o doesn't want to be overlapping the p.
    How about a splash of rain on the Hippo's nose or head?

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    look good amazing man

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    Love it!


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    To be honest, the shading of the hippo just looks odd to me. It doesn't seem to fit.

    Otherwise, great job.

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    Quote Loops wrote: View Post
    Looking good Shane.
    I think it needs a bit of positive kerning on the type, the o doesn't want to be overlapping the p.
    How about a splash of rain on the Hippo's nose or head?
    Tried the spacing with the P and the O, didn't look right to be honest.
    As for the water, I'm creating a few alternations with a RainCoat, water, umbrella etc.

    Quote n0iZe wrote: View Post
    To be honest, the shading of the hippo just looks odd to me. It doesn't seem to fit.

    Otherwise, great job.
    What do you mean by shading? :/

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    looks good
    though.. whats it for?
    "All night long I dream of the day.."

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    Quote piax wrote: View Post
    looks good
    though.. whats it for?
    read the first post.

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    Quote Shane wrote: View Post
    What do you mean by shading? :/
    The off-coloring on the left side of the hippo. It looks odd. ;]

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    I like the general logo and the font is suitable to match with the image.

    Waiting to see the alterations with coat/umbrella etc.

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    A raincoat company..
    so you're making raincoats now :| or just the logo?
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